Thursday, September 24, 2009

The Terry Fox Run

Terry Fox was such an inspiring person, how he ran almost a marathon everyday!!! Now days there is one thing that is kinda scary. There are so many people affected by cancer that people don't really care you know what i mean? Well for an example: So many people are all hyped up about the swine flu that it makes all those deadly and dangerous disease seem unimportant and not as bad. well cancer is really really bad and there is no guaranteed cure for it. Hearing that doesn't it make you want to raise more money for cancer? There are more and more people affected by cancer every year so hopefully this year at the Terry Fox run we can raise a lot of money and contribute to this cause.


Terry Fox was just such a determined, and hopeful guy. You have to respect a guy like that. He ran over three thousand kilometres hoping to cross Canada! Do you think you would have enough endurance and spirit to run a marathon a day?!?!?! I know I wouldn't!!!! People like him don't come along that often so we have to help out in his run, in other words really pick up where he left off. I hope one day cancer will be cured and the only way we can speedup the process is help and donate.

2 comments:

  1. -Had some AMAZING ideas
    -Related himself to the topic

    wish:Make it flow a little better

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  2. Great job. You may want to work on your puncuation, but other than that you did and amazing job. I like how you brought in other world problems and put in voice:)

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